Tuesday, August 2, 2011

Skill post 1

In writing class out teacher gaver us our first mission. It was to write a skill post is our blogs. The topic was to choose one camp out of other 3 camp which he created. The name of these camp is camp "Big apple", camp "Ranch west" and the last one was "Head start splash" Big apple is a camp which is held in New York city. You prepare SAT and other English tests with Korean professers who got at list a masters degree.In this camp we can go city viewing, watch broadway shows, and go to famous mueseums. You will live in a dorm. In Ranch wast camp, you choose a subject to learn and you will be taught by recent graduates from the local university. You will stay in a home-stay situation. The programs are horseback riding, rive rafting, hiking, canoeing, and mountain biking.Lastly, in Head start splash, you will study a condensed version of the material used during one semester in a certified "International" School. They are taught by local teachers with Bachelor's degrees and certifies to teach ESL. At list one parent must accompany each student to this camp, and they will stay in a small apartment near the beach. They have activites including ; snorkeling, fishing, a trip to a local butterfly gareden and visits to lecal exotic animal refuges.

It was hard for me to choose a certain camp because, I thought all of these camp looked exciting and interesting. However my comparing all of the explanations I finally choosed that camp "Big Apple" will be the appropriate camp for me.
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Why did I choose camp "Big apple"? I really like to co campings or attend in various camps. I also have experiences in dorm life. The point which I like about this camp is the location, the programs, and the activites.

First, I like the location of this camp.
I like the point that which is not located inside Korea. I think it is better to be in New York than in Korea. Compared to Korea New York has lots of thing to experience and have a city view. A lot of groups even make a buisness out of touring New York city. I just love the whole view of New York!

Second, I like how the4 program works.
I want to prepare for SAT and other English test. Also I thinki it would be comfortable to talk with professers, who got at list a masters degree, However, in Korea you start to prepare SAT and other test when you grow much older.

Lastly, I love the activities.
Usually, when you go camp in Korea it is hard to see something real interesting. On the other hand, there are lots of measuems and watch shows in broadway. I feel so excited to think about these places!

Therefore, I choosed big apple camp because of the lecation, the program, and the cativites which they do, I wish this could be a real camp not a imaginary one!

4 comments:

  1. Good writing. I thought Ranch West camp was the best camp out of three.

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  2. Thank you Michalle!:) I will see your skill post too~!

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  3. Nice writing but we need to work a little on the formation of your paragraphs. The structure needs a little work. Good job, though!

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  4. Thanks....I think I also should work the grammers too!

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